Peer feedback

Peer Feedback

Cover Feedback

For my front cover some of the feedback that I received for it was to add more information to it and make it more appealing for people, this was because my design was quite simplistic and not too complex. My reasoning for doing this was to make it as easy as possible for myself as I am not too experienced or good at using photoshop. So to make my front cover seem more lively and be more appealing I added a puff, advertising a competition within the magazine, this was something that I did consider adding in the first place. So since my feedback agreed with this I then added this.

Contents Page Feedback

The feedback I got for my contents page was quite helpful as it gave me some ideas of how to improve my work. One suggestion was to add some captions and possibly page numbers on the images that were on the right of my contents page. This was something I had not thought to do as it had slipped my mind before asking for feedback so this proved helpful. 

Double Spread Page Feedback

There was not much feedback I got for my double spread page, something that was mentioned was whether to have borders around the text on my double spread page. I think that it will be better without using the border and for the most part the feedback agreed. My reasoning for picking that is because most of the football magazines that I looked into did not have borders around the text.

Billboard Feedback 

For my billboard peer feedback was very useful as I was not sure how to go about creating one. A major point made in the feedback was the image I used as well as the font on the tagline I used for the magazine. So in response to what was said I changed the image so that the text on the billboard would come out much better and be easier for the audience to see. The font was then changed because the font I used originally did not look very professional or inspiring. So using DaFont I then found a font that worked much better and made the billboard appear much more appealing/